I actually had a letter published in the Jewish Chronicle responding to a column by Melanie Phillips . Interestingly, they edited it to make it a little less vitriolic. The original version is below but I've put the original version in brackets:
[Recent
condemnations of Amos Oz and more generally of the Israeli left by Melanie
Phillips, reveal the ignorance and double standards behind her self-righteous
version of Zionism.]
Melanie Phillips seems
[utterly] unaware that it was secular Jews that developed the Zionist project in
its formative years and beyond and that many had deep roots in the political left.
IsraelShe appears similarly oblivious of the existence of the sizeable religious
Jewish peace movement in Israel and outside – organisations such as Rabbis For Human Rights that are
simultaneously committed to Judaism and to leftwing Zionism.
Renowned scholars
such as Gershom Shalom, Martin Buber and Yeshayahu Leibowitz who
combined invaluable contributions to Jewish learning with deep misgivings about
the nature of the Israeli state do not appear to be part of her worldview.
She [is] also [appears] ignorant of the many sociological
studies that show how the majority of so-called ‘secular’ in fact do take part
in certain [‘religious’] religious Jewish practices such as making a Seder or fasting on
Yom Kippur.
IsraelMelanie
Phillips [reveals the rampant] shows the hypocrisy [behind] of many of those on the right who
claim to love Israelbut who have no real love or appreciation for the complexity and vibrancy of
Israeli culture.
She condemns those who criticise Israeli government policies
when it suits her and then disparages Israelis like Oz who have a [deeper] deep
understanding and love of Israeli [than they could ever possibly appreciate] when they support the government.
In general I'm not too unhappy about the changes - I was possibly just a bit too vitriolic. However, the change they made on the last sentence goes beyond mere editing to actually rewriting. I don't disagree with it and I can't be arsed to write and complain but it does stick in the craw a little...
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